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Revelation by ~DarkPhyre024:iconDarkPhyre024:

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Revelation

Creeping within,
I feel it again
crawling around,
beneath my skin
I open my eyes,
to what's inside
only to find,
that I'm truly blind

Reflections shown,
I see myself
the truth within,
hides with stealth
I look again,
through hazel eyes
only to find,
I'm full of lies

The image shatters,
and breaks away
falling apart,
caught in the fray
closing my eyes,
I'm held by fear
only to find,
a falling tear

I search within,
to find my name
but in the end
it's all the same
all this time
I've been confined
only to find,
I've lost my mind

I'm so ashamed,
of what I've seen
everything I'm not,
and in between
I'm falling down
as I make my pleas
because I've found,
I'm not even me.
©2005-2009 ~DarkPhyre024
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Submitted: January 21, 2005
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When you doubt yourself, you have to take a step back and look in the mirror. You have to look in yourself, deep within, to find the truth behind everything. Why are you the way you are? What made you that way? When you finally come to the realization of who you are, do you even recognize yourself?

Self-Realizations can produce revelations. They can help you find out who you are......what you are.

Are you even you? Am I even me?
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~DanzerFox:iconDanzerFox: Jan 21, 2005, 7:47:46 AM
wow mike you should write poetry books :P hehe your are a very nice writer(only read like 6 paragraphs ^^;) cant wait to see more
~xxxclemmaxxx:iconxxxclemmaxxx: Jan 21, 2005, 1:27:28 PM
That is amazingly good. I love the way in each verse he/she is discovering how much you don't know yourself. The feeling is overwhelming.
~4myself:icon4myself: Jan 21, 2005, 2:39:15 PM
i really like this a lot. i feel that way about myself sometimes and that was an awesome way of showing it.

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Rhyming isn't everything
It's the meaning behind the words
Feelings that are put there
By a writter's heart and soul
:tux:
~DarkPhyre024:iconDarkPhyre024: Jan 21, 2005, 2:42:45 PM
Thanks much :aww:

As unfortunate it is that you can feel it on a personal level, it makes the words more than just words to you... I think.

Thanks again.

--
-emotion is the ink, and the pen is my weapon-
~DarkPhyre024:iconDarkPhyre024: Jan 21, 2005, 2:44:29 PM
Thanks much :aww: and for the :+fav:

It is a bit overwhelming.

--
-emotion is the ink, and the pen is my weapon-
~4myself:icon4myself: Jan 22, 2005, 9:31:18 AM
:) yea

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Rhyming isn't everything
It's the meaning behind the words
Feelings that are put there
By a writter's heart and soul
:tux:
~DarkPhyre024:iconDarkPhyre024: Jan 22, 2005, 3:06:21 PM
^_^ *blushes* aww thanks Danz =D

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-emotion is the ink, and the pen is my weapon-
~PianoBlack5:iconPianoBlack5: Jan 23, 2005, 10:31:25 AM
That's just awesome. Conveys alot of meaning and emotion (ALOT)

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If someone tells you to take a breath because you're talking too much, just tell them you can breathe out of your ears.

It works for me anyway.
~IB-JP:iconIB-JP: Jan 23, 2005, 11:09:54 AM
Good work. You know im not one for big talk on here, but nicely done....

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Love isnt 50/50 its 100/100 give it all you've got!

JP
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